My sO-CaLLeD LiFe

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My sO-CaLLeD LiFe
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vain hope: tell me what you think

I feel hurt when i look at you
I feel hurt and I know you do too
I feel sorrow the pain of looking at tommorow
but i feel the hope deep inside
no longer being just along for the ride
I am refusing to be a puppet on a string
yet i am here when the church bells ring
with out you i will be ok
I am just pushing for the day
I love you
Deticated to my mom

Re: vain hope: tell me what you think

I love it I know what you mean awesome keep writing yout heart out

Re: vain hope: tell me what you think

I kno this poem is old but I just found it. anyway it is really good, You should post more :]

Re: vain hope: tell me what you think

idc if this poem is old! its absolutley AWESOME.. i can relate to it..keep up the good stuff